Room 2 have been working hard in writing this term, learning to retell a story with all the main events in order.
Here are two of the latest ones.....Peter and the wolf
Peter and Dad were in a house and his Dad said, "Get back in the fence because there is a fox in the forest." But Peter did not listen and the fox ate the duck. The bird went around the fox away from his teeth and he tied the fox on the tail. Dad came out and the hunters were happy. Peter said, "Help me take him to the zoo." They went to the zoo and now they are safe. By Sasha
Peter was going outside and he wanted to play in the meadow but then his Grandfather came out and he said, "Do not go in the meadow." But he forgot what his Grandfather said and he went out of the fence gate. He saw a bird and he said, "Go to the meadow." The bird did and he followed the bird.
There was a pond there too and there was a duck there. There was a cat too and there was a fox in the forest waiting. He made a noise and his Grandfather came outside and he was very mad at him. He said in a grumpy voice, "Come back inside!"
His Grandfather said, "Never go outside in the meadow again!"
Then the fox came out side and the fox swallowed the duck and Peter saw the fox swallowing the duck and he went out the gate. He climbed up the tree and the cat climbed up the tree too, but he got a rope first and he put the rope on the fox's tail. He tightened the rope when it was on the fox's tail and tied it to the tree. Then the men came to the house. Then Peter said to the men, "Take this fox to the zoo." By Jay
An amazing effort from both these writers!!
Here are two of the latest ones.....Peter and the wolf
Peter and Dad were in a house and his Dad said, "Get back in the fence because there is a fox in the forest." But Peter did not listen and the fox ate the duck. The bird went around the fox away from his teeth and he tied the fox on the tail. Dad came out and the hunters were happy. Peter said, "Help me take him to the zoo." They went to the zoo and now they are safe. By Sasha
Peter was going outside and he wanted to play in the meadow but then his Grandfather came out and he said, "Do not go in the meadow." But he forgot what his Grandfather said and he went out of the fence gate. He saw a bird and he said, "Go to the meadow." The bird did and he followed the bird.
There was a pond there too and there was a duck there. There was a cat too and there was a fox in the forest waiting. He made a noise and his Grandfather came outside and he was very mad at him. He said in a grumpy voice, "Come back inside!"
His Grandfather said, "Never go outside in the meadow again!"
Then the fox came out side and the fox swallowed the duck and Peter saw the fox swallowing the duck and he went out the gate. He climbed up the tree and the cat climbed up the tree too, but he got a rope first and he put the rope on the fox's tail. He tightened the rope when it was on the fox's tail and tied it to the tree. Then the men came to the house. Then Peter said to the men, "Take this fox to the zoo." By Jay
An amazing effort from both these writers!!